some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learna foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Dear hasna I write to explore the diverse motivations for acquiring foreign language skills.

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travel and foreign employment, others assert it offers deeper cognitive, cultural, and personal enrichment. Indeed, language proficiency enhances travel experiences and career prospects abroad. Yet, it transcends mere utility. Learning languages nurtures cognitive agility, fosters cultural empathy, broadens communication, and provides personal

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. In my view, foreign language acquisition is a multifaceted

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. Beyond its practical benefits, it elevates one's understanding of the world, enriches relationships, and promotes cognitive growth. It is a journey worth embarking upon for reasons extending far beyond travel and work. Sincerely, Dear Neena

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