The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996 The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996 The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
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The presented line chart provides information on the sum of noise complaints made to the Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the highest number of complaints were related to roads, traffic, and factories.
While
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grievance about domestic and household roar showed a downward trend, the other categories experienced an upward trend.
To begin
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with, in 1980, the number of
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about domestic roar was just above 600.
However
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, over the following two years, there was a decrease in grievances to 400, and
this
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downward trend continued until the end of the period.
In contrast
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, grievances about roar from factories stood at 400 in 1980 but gradually increased to 600 by 1996.
On the other hand
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, criticisms about traffic congestion were approximately 300 in 1980 but steadily increased over the following three years (1980 to 1984) and
then
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suddenly dropped to 200 in 1996.
Furthermore
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, the sum of criticisms about road noise was around 300 in the three previous years but declined to 400 between 1988 and 1990, and
then
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rose dramatically to above 1200 in 1996.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complaints
  • Environmental Health authorities
  • Noise pollution
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Spikes
  • Fluctuations
  • Time frame
  • Population growth
  • Industrial development
  • Public awareness
  • Implications
  • Addressing the issue
  • Data analysis
  • Year-on-year changes
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