Some believe that advances in technology are increasing the gap between rich and poor while others think the opposite is happening. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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of all, I intend to illustrate why it seems to some people that the pecuniary difference seems to be enlarged

due to

technology. Primarily, it comes down to the fact that rich people enjoy more resources which they can utilize to take more advantage of the latest technologies, as some of the

techical

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technical

tools cost

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amount of capital to set up and operate to a decent capacity.

Furthermore

, the complexity rises

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along with

the development of cutting-edge approaches, which means that

one

needs proper

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professional

training by experts who

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substantially.

Secondly

, I want to inspect the opposite direction, which

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the scientific causes of the shortening distance between the well-off and the penury. From my

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perspective

,

one

potential element is that the Internet really unlocks learning treasures for the group of relatively limited funds.

For instance

, they can master real skills and crafts online without investing anything upfront.

Then

, they can translate those freely acquired

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abilities

to purchasing power, which leads to the diminishing

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monetary

space.

Third,

I will demonstrate my own standpoint, which is the

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neutral

ground. To be more

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, I think the key factor lies in the qualities of the individuals

instead

of the tools. Essentially, it's about the user's desire to adapt and learn. Personally, I believe that

one

can do great things prior

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during the modern age regardless of

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financial circumstances. To go

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step

further

, the environment is not the focus to me, I

perfer

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prefer

personal characteristics, which I deem the underlying and

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decisive

piece. In the end, looking at

this

issue from the above two angles is thought-provoking and engaging, but I insist

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that to truly alter your position in the world, you need to start from yourself and focus on the inner qualities.