The diagram below shows how geothrmal energy is used to produce electricity
The picture turbine and
discribes
the way Correct your spelling
describes
of
generate electricity by using Change preposition
to
the
geothermal energy.
When looking at the diagram it can be clearly seen the geothermal power station has four main units: the cold Correct article usage
apply
water
storage tank, the injection well, the production well, Use synonyms
condenser
and two Correct article usage
the condenser
equipments
,Correct your spelling
equipment
Correct article usage
the
Use synonyms
generator
. The tank Correct article usage
the generator
store
cool Fix the agreement mistake
stores
water
, Use synonyms
condenser
and turbine and Correct word choice
and condenser
generator
are established on the ground Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
othe
two storage units are situated under the ground Correct your spelling
the
by
parallel to each other.
Change preposition
apply
At
the beginning, theChange the preposition
In
liquide
Correct your spelling
liquid
store
Replace the word
stored
in
normal temperature is Change preposition
at
pupmed
down into the injection well that Correct your spelling
pumped
built
4.5 Km away from the ground level.After that Add a missing verb
is built
water
Use synonyms
being running
through a tunnel, constructed in the area mainly Wrong verb form
runs
contain
hot rocks in order to heat Wrong verb form
containing
water
at Use synonyms
it's
boiling point. Correct your spelling
its
This
boiled Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
Add a missing verb
is then
stock
in Wrong verb form
stocked
production
well.
In the next step, Correct article usage
a production
aiming
produce steam from hot Add the particle
aiming to
water
, Use synonyms
then
pumped up to the condenser on the earth. Linking Words
These
steam Correct determiner usage
This
Add a missing verb
is use
use
Replace the word
used
for
operate turbines which give power to Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
generator
. Add an article
the generator
At
the final stage, electricity is produced by the Change preposition
In
generator
and Use synonyms
distribute
to consumers.Wrong verb form
distributed
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