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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.
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two
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 charts illustrate the
number
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 of exchange
students
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 from
college
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colleges
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 in
Europian
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European
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 countries and
Australia
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 in 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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, the total
number
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 of exchange
students
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 to
Australia
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 had increased in 2009, but the amount showed no change in
Australia
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.
Two
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 out of five nations in Europe raised the
number
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 of
students
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 in 2009. The total of college
students
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 in Europe increased in 2 years. In 2007, there were 189 people who came from Europe to study in
Australia
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,
then
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 the
number
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 surged to 226 in 2009, which increased about a quarter of the amount.
In contrast
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, the
number
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 of Australian
students
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 in
Europian
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European
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university
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universities
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 remained unchanged in 2009, which was still 152 people.
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Sweden and Germany had more
students
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studied
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studying
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 in
Australia
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 in 2009 than
2007
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in 2007
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, their
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students
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student's
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 numbers were 34 and 27 in the latter year,
however
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, the amount surged to 42 and 62 after
two
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 years, especially the German
students
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 had
two
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 times more than before.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, number, students, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 2 times.
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