Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, paying
taxes
can develop society's infrastructure. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who don't think same
way? Some Add an article
the same
people
believe that giving a hand to the community
is more useful and lies with lots of responsibilities. I completely disagree and in this
essay
Add a comma
essay,
i
will provide my opinion with examples.
First of all, not all Change the capitalization
I
people
are curious to help society in such
situation
that requires huge Correct article usage
a situation
physicals
work. Fix the agreement mistake
physical
For example
, cleaning the road needs physically
uncleanness which most Change the word
physical
of
Change preposition
apply
the
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people
don't come to do. If people
shy
to Add a missing verb
are shy
washed
their areas Wrong verb form
wash
then
roads would be critical to drive or
are harmful for children,Change preposition
on or
old
ages to walk.
Another reason Change preposition
of old
i
disagree Change the capitalization
I
because
young ages are mostly busy with their homework, Add a missing verb
is because
whereas
adults are busy with their jobs. Take todays
lives for Change noun form
today's
an
example where Correct article usage
apply
people
mostly
at home playing games rather than playing out or giving a hand to the Add a missing verb
are mostly
societies
for necessary purposes. I strongly believe that this
will take
the Verb problem
put
community
in a worse situation for living, people
nowadays have less concern about their societies
for both good and bad reasons.
On the other hand
, collecting taxes
can play a good role as well as
can be more beneficial to the residents that live in societies
. To be more precise, abstract infrastructure, malls, clean roads, compulsory dustbins etc. As a result
, the community
people
get a fresh environment to live a long life being far from dust, disease, and shifting home by getting living problems.
In conclusion, Although
it is a common belief that taxes
can give the necessities that don't come from societies
involvement. I believe that responding to Change noun form
society's
community
needs has getting
low over the century Replace the word
gotten
where
Rephrase
apply
people
like to do various work by themselves in their respective areas. Personally
Add a comma
Personally,
i
think it will be best to contribute Change the capitalization
I
taxes
to the
society rather than involvement of humanCorrect article usage
apply
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