Naughty students should be separated from others.Do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, naughty students should be separated from others. I support
this
idea and I have some reasons for supporting it and I think they should study at another school.
The first reason is that naughty children make others look like themselves. For example
, they influence children to smoke or drink alcohol. For
this
reason, the classes of they must be separate. Furthermore
, they disrupt the lesson. To be more specific, they make a lot of noise in the class and this
leads to students not concentrating properly.
In conclusion, I believe that naughty students should study in special schools or classes. This
is good for their education as well as
for others.Submitted by askerovhamid06 on
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Provide more specific examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
Consider using more transition words to improve the coherence of your essay.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite