With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What are benefits of protecting places for natural beauty spots? How can it be solved?

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their natural
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places
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the increasing
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will examine the advantages of preserving natural
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spot
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spots
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and propose some solutions to them.
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, protecting natural
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spot
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spots
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can give
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humans
a good living.
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, ensuring good environmental conditions can lead
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to
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good health
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conditions
. To illustrate, assuring biodiversity
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trees can provide
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with
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good air
circumtances
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circumstances
, and reduce the level of pollution which will
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health and
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the next generation. Because the
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existing
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vegetation in urban
area
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can
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the circumstances better.
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human activity to do their life without compromising the disease.
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, another benefit that needs to be
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considered
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climate change. The green area can
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potentially
absorb the carbon emissions by transportation combustion that
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in the deduction of
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effect. In fact, increasing
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the
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centers
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may have a tendency to
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deforestation
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the reduction
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vegetation area.
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, protecting natural
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could obviously avoid
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problem. In terms of the solution
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problem, a campaign that encourages the human and developer and factory regarding
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natural protection can be implemented to
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human
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humans
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with a proper
live
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and give
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safe
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a safe
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planetary.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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