The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
process
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diagram illustrates how
plastic
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bottles
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are recycled.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are nine stages in the recycling
plastic
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bottles
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process
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. The
process
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begins with people throwing
plastic
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bottles
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in the recycling garbage can. The recycling traffic loads
plastic
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bottles
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when the recycling garbage can is full. At the third stage in the
process
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, recycling centre workers would sort
plastic
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bottles
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as available to recycle and unavailable to recycle. And
then
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,
plastic
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bottles
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that can be recycled are compressed into blocks by recycling centre workers. After
plastic
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bottles
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become large blocks. At the fifth stage in the
process
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, the blocks are crushed by a machine, and
then
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they need to be washed. After that,
plastic
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pellets are produced by a blender and are heated to become raw materials.
Finally
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, the raw material is produced for products,
such
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as recycling bags,
plastic
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t-shirts,
plastic
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pens,
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lunch boxes, and
plastic
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bottles
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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