The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
process
diagram illustrates how plastic
bottles
are recycled. Overall
, it is clear that
there are nine stages in the recycling plastic
bottles
process
.
The process
begins with people throwing plastic
bottles
in the recycling garbage can. The recycling traffic loads plastic
bottles
when the recycling garbage can is full. At the third stage in the process
, recycling centre workers would sort plastic
bottles
as available to recycle and unavailable to recycle. And then
, plastic
bottles
that can be recycled are compressed into blocks by recycling centre workers.
After plastic
bottles
become large blocks. At the fifth stage in the process
, the blocks are crushed by a machine, and then
they need to be washed. After that, plastic
pellets are produced by a blender and are heated to become raw materials. Finally
, the raw material is produced for products, such
as recycling bags, plastic
t-shirts, plastic
pens, plastic
lunch boxes, and plastic
bottles
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