The Internet will never replace traditional course books in school. How far do you agree with this prediction?

ad all over the world and some
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it will replace books in
school
in soon future.l personally
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this
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essay will examine the reasons.
To begin
, some argue that the internet will attack the attendance class in
school
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.
Firstly
, it is easier for
students
to learn from home
instead
of going to
school
. In other words, individuals feel comfortable when
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online and easy to attend all
classes
because
school
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is far
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and
some time
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they
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difficulty in transporting
For instance
, the survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos University showed that the
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attendance
increase
70
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% in covid-19 when the study was online.
This
means the online course is effective and should be used more.
On the other hand
, others believe nothing will replace attending
classes
because in class they can act and transfer the knowledge to fact which
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them to understand better and they can work as groups to seek
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information or
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homework.
Moreover
,
student
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provides
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fast feedback with full explanation from
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teacher
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a teacher
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in
school
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in
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online
they can not practice the knowledge so it is just abstract words.
Moreover
,
students
feel comfortable reading and writing in
school
with their colleagues more than when they are looking at
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alone.
However
,
according to
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students
preferre
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prefer
school
classes
instead
of
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classes
.
This
logic
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School
significant in
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learners'
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live
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and can not be changed.
To sum up
,
although
some argue
internet
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will attract the attendant
classes
due to
it
available
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at home . I believe
,
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the best way to study is
school
courses because
students
enjoy learning with their friends.
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