The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.

The bar chart

illustrats

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illustrates

study

have

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has

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been decided by adults for several

differents

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different

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reasons.

While

the pie graph

depict

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how people think the payment of students learning should be shared.

Overall

, both

of

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interest in

subject

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the subject

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and

gain

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gaining

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qualifications have the highest trend,

However

,

taxpayer

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the taxpayer

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has the lowest proportion in

term

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terms

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of costs shared. The research has shown that adults are not

interesting

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interested

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in

socialized

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socialising

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and

engage

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engaging

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with

other student

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another student

other students

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.

furthermore

,

helful

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helpful

for

current

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my current

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job,

improve

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to improve

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promotion and enjoy learning

have

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to have

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an

avarege

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average

output which

almost

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is almost

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around 20 per

cents

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cent

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. Both

of

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apply

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interest in

subject

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the subject

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and

gain

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gaining

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qualification have the

lion

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lion's

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shares

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share

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among all other results with

significant

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a significant

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rate

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rates

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40

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of 40

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and 38 respectively. As

it

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apply

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shown

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in the pie chart,

Individual

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Individuals

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and

employer

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employers

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have the highest proportion which is around two-thirds, but ultimately,

taxpayer

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the taxpayer

a taxpayer

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has been considered the lowest percentage which got

least

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the least

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attention

of

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on

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what people

are think

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think

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. In conclusion,

student

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the student

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has

essentials

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essential

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reasons to study

such

as

interest

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interesting

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material and

feed

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feeding

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their mind with qualifications.

On the other hand

,

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the taxpayer

a taxpayer

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taxpayer

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taxpayers

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must be replaced with

other alternative

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another alternative

other alternatives

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in order to increase

people

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people's

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attentions

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attention

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.