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The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.

The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.
#show #survey #adult #education #first #adults #study #people #cost
The bar chart
illustrats
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illustrates
 study
have
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has
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 been decided by adults for several
differents
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different
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 reasons.
While
 the pie graph
depict
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depicts
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 how people think the payment of students learning should be shared.
Overall
, both
of
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apply
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interest in
subject
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the subject
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 and
gain
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gaining
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 qualifications have the highest trend,
However
,
taxpayer
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the taxpayer
a taxpayer
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 has the lowest proportion in
term
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terms
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 of costs shared. The research has shown that adults are not
interesting
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interested
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 in
socialized
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socialising
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 and
engage
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engaging
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 with
other student
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another student
other students
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.
furthermore
,
helful
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helpful
 for
current
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my current
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 job,
improve
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to improve
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 promotion and enjoy learning
have
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to have
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 an
avarege
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average
 output which
almost
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is almost
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 around 20 per
cents
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cent
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. Both
of
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apply
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interest in
subject
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the subject
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 and
gain
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gaining
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 qualification have the
lion
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lion's
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shares
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share
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 among all other results with
significant
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a significant
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rate
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rates
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40
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of 40
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 and 38 respectively. As
it
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apply
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shown
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is shown
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 in the pie chart,
Individual
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Individuals
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 and
employer
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employers
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 have the highest proportion which is around two-thirds, but ultimately,
taxpayer
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the taxpayer
a taxpayer
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 has been considered the lowest percentage which got
least
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the least
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 attention
of
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on
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 what people
are think
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think
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. In conclusion,
student
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the student
a student
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 has
essentials
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essential
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 reasons to study
such
 as
interest
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interesting
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 material and
feed
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feeding
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 their mind with qualifications.
On the other hand
,
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the taxpayer
a taxpayer
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taxpayer
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taxpayers
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 must be replaced with
other alternative
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another alternative
other alternatives
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 in order to increase
people
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people's
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attentions
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attention
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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