The charts below show the percentage of people using public transport and that of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of people using public transport and that of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line charts below display the
proportion
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of individuals who
use
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their own car and the ones who
use
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public transportation in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Perth and
Adelaide
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from 2000 to 2010.
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, in
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Adelaide
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Adelaide,
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there is a steady increase in the
use
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of private
cars
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and a slight variation in the
use
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of public transport. Brisbane’s public transit rose significantly,
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the
use
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of personal
cars
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in Melbourne declined moderately.
Adelaide
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is the city with the least
use
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of public transportation , starting the
period
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with just 5%,
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number fluctuated gradually during the
period
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, before 2008, in 5 different
years
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reached its highest point, 6%, but after 2008 it started to drop slightly, returning to 5%. In Brisbane, 15% of humans at the beginning of the
period
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used public transit, after two
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,
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proportion
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began to grow sharply, getting to 25% in 2006, after remaining two
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stable, it started increasing modestly, ending the
period
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at approximately 28%. 70% of individuals in 2000 used their individual vehicle in
Adelaide
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, being the city with the highest number of people using their own car,
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proportion
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rose moderately to just above 80% during the next 9
years
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, and the
last
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year it climbed considerably to 90%. Melbourne between 2000 and 2002, had 30% of people using personal
cars
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, but in 2002 dropped 10%, being at 20% in 2003,
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grew gradually, reaching its beginning rate in 2007 and during the next 4
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the
proportion
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varied, ending the
period
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with just over 20% of people using private
cars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, use, adelaide, cars, period, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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