The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.

The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
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the information about
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the weather
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in
sydney
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and
london
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of
temperature
and hours of daylight
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weekend
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2018.
Overall
, In 2018,two cities of weather information
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measured by the government.
accordingly
,
temperature
and sunrise,sunset
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london
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the
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temperature
has increased in
sydney
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highly
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. First of all, the
temperature
in
london
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in
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december
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28th ,max 29c and min 4c and
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29th
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the 29th
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max 13c and min 3c it increased
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c
in one day.
whereas
sunrise in
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london
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rise
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at 8:05
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28th
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and 8:06in 29th,30th.
however
,sunset in evening
london
sunfall at in 15:57 and variation between time in one minute. In sydney
temperature
are very high when compared to
london
maximum degree is 31c and minimum degree is 19
c
in 30th december.
in addition
early morning in 28th and 29th are sun up at 5:45 but in 30th sun down at 5:46,
moreover
in evening sunset at 20:06 and 20:47 in 29 and 30th december in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, temperature, c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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