Write a letter to your friend who is interested in learning how to drive. In your letter ● say why a driving license is advantageous ● recommend a driving school ● give any extra guidance /tips Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___________,
Dear Tim,
I thought I'd write to you, try to convince you to
finally
get a diving license
and also
suggest a great instructor I know.
Once you have your driving license
with you, then
you can easily pick up your children from school
. It'll also
help you commute to work easily and at your convenience. A driving license
is also
another government proof that may be required in scenarios like renting an apartment or in your work's background verification.
I know a great driving school
in your area. The name of the school
is Elite Driving Education. I learned from the same school
and the instructor's name is Chloe, I trained under her, and she is very professional and methodical in her approach. The centre is also
very cost-effective. It's even possible to use your own car for training in case you wish to lower the fees further
.
Here's some advice from my side, try renting a car for a month and go driving at night alone using your learner's license
, which you'll receive during your training period. This
will better your judgement because the stakes are pretty high for your own safety.
Anyway, good luck with the lessons.
Best wishes,
NileshSubmitted by majumdarnilesh21 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
To increase clarity and logical flow, consider starting a new paragraph for each main point. For example, separate the advantages of having a driving license, the recommendation of the driving school, and additional tips into distinct paragraphs.
Task Achievement
This letter is well-written, but ensure all points are covered comprehensively. For example, explaining a bit more about how the driving license helps with background verification could add more depth.
Task Achievement
The letter is warmly written and uses an appropriate, friendly tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are effective and add to the coherence of the entire letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite