Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the privacy of celebrities should not be exposed to the public. I strongly agree with
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of the human rights and exposing it to the public can be breaking the law.
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on a famous person's life to the public can lead to danger, not just to the person but Use synonyms
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knowledge can lead to unwanted comments or allegations, which can lead to great distress. In Indonesia Linking Words
for example
, in 2017 there was a celebrity called Ariel who just got depressed and attempted to commit suicide because he could not hold the amount of hate comments coming to his family's private social media.
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could lead to breaking the law since it is Use synonyms
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of human rights. Use synonyms
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one
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of the big personalities in Indonesia got exposed to where he usually does his laundry and it led to people coming to that same place and giving discomfort feeling for him.
In conclusion, I strongly support that celebrity privacy should not be the subject of interest to media because revealing Use synonyms
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could destroy a celebrity's life, and the process of gathering the details can lead to crimeUse synonyms
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