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Band 7

On a recent holiday, you lost a valubale item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company, in your letter - Describe the item you lost - Explain how you lost it -Tell the insurance company what you would like to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about an issue that happened to me yesterday when I was travelling from Rome to Milano. Unfortunately, I have lost a valuable purchase that I just bought. It's a red digital camera that cost me a lot. and I'm planning to give it to my little sister at her birthday party. I remembered that I was holding the camera
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 I was on the train,
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 when I arrived at my destination. I discovered that I lost it. I came back to search for it, and I asked so many people there , but no one was helping me. I would like to suggest that your company consider all the damage cost that I got
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transfer the money to my bank account. Looking forward to hearing from you , If you need any
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 details you can reach me by my personal email. Thank you for understanding, Nlud Mur, Kind regards,

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Try to provide more specific details about the item, such as the brand and model of the camera, to enhance your task achievement score.
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Add a polite request for the necessary insurance claim process to strengthen the task response.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a suitable tone for a formal request to an insurance company.
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