This is a part of a letter you receive from an English pen friend. In your next letter, please tell me about as popular holiday destinations in your country. What can you do and see there? Is it a good place for young people to visit?

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Dear Ken I am writing to provide you with the

popular

Correct quantifier usage

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

178 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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This is a part of a letter you receive from an English pen friend. In your next letter, please tell me about as popular holiday destinations in your country. What can you do and see there? Is it a good place for young people to visit?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people believe that eventually all the jobs will be done by artificial intelligence. What is your opinion?

Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Scientific Research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree?