the graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new zealand

the graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new zealand
The line chart depicts annual tourist expenditure (in
NZD
) in New Zealand from five different countries from 1996 to 2014.
Overall
, China's
visitors
marked the highest expense
growth
,
while
Japan's did the reverse.
In addition
, visitor
growth
rate from US, UK, and Australia was almost similar. In the initial period, China's
visitors
almost spent zero expenditure in New Zealand, and rose dramatically until reached a peak in 2004 (slightly above 500
NZD
),
then
decreased gradually to the year 2008 (only leaving half from the apex), and rose again but not exceeding the peak in 2014 with almost 500
NZD
. Japan's
visitors
at the beginning of the period scored roughly below 500
NZD
. It grew and reached its pinnacle in 2002 surpassing 1000
NZD
, and decreased to its second lowest number with almost 500
NZD
in 2014. Australia and the US in the initial period were marked as the two largest
visitors
with almost a hundred
NZD
,
while
UK
visitors
became the fourth largest with almost 500
NZD
.
Moreover
, Australian and UK visitor expenditures expenditure witnessed fluctuation and ended with a
growth
rate of approximately two times, but US visitor expenditures experienced a steadier trend with a
growth
rate of almost two times.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words nzd, visitors, growth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Revenue
  • Tourism sector
  • Economic contribution
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak season
  • Demographics
  • Accommodation
  • Leisure activities
  • Luxury travellers
  • Backpackers
  • Business travellers
  • Souvenirs
  • Global market
  • Sustainable tourism
  • Policy
  • Influx of tourists
  • Consumer spending
  • Tourist attractions
  • Hospitality industry
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