the graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new zealand
The line chart depicts annual tourist expenditure (in
NZD
) in New Zealand from five different countries from 1996 to 2014. Overall
, China's visitors
marked the highest expense growth
, while
Japan's did the reverse. In addition
, visitor growth
rate from US, UK, and Australia was almost similar.
In the initial period, China's visitors
almost spent zero expenditure in New Zealand, and rose dramatically until reached a peak in 2004 (slightly above 500 NZD
), then
decreased gradually to the year 2008 (only leaving half from the apex), and rose again but not exceeding the peak in 2014 with almost 500 NZD
. Japan's visitors
at the beginning of the period scored roughly below 500 NZD
. It grew and reached its pinnacle in 2002 surpassing 1000 NZD
, and decreased to its second lowest number with almost 500 NZD
in 2014.
Australia and the US in the initial period were marked as the two largest visitors
with almost a hundred NZD
, while
UK visitors
became the fourth largest with almost 500 NZD
. Moreover
, Australian and UK visitor expenditures expenditure witnessed fluctuation and ended with a growth
rate of approximately two times, but US visitor expenditures experienced a steadier trend with a growth
rate of almost two times.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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