B1.Write a letter to your uncle informing him about your improvement of performance in Annual Examination

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Dear Uncle I hope

this

letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. I wanted to share some exciting news with you – I've seen a significant improvement in my performance in the recent Annual Examinations! I've been working really hard over the past year, dedicating extra time to my studies and seeking guidance from my teachers. All that effort has paid off wonderfully. I managed to score [mention your improved grades or percentage] in my exams. I'm absolutely thrilled with

this

achievement, and I couldn't have done it without your constant encouragement and support. I owe a big part of

this

success to your motivating words and belief in me. Your faith in my abilities has always been a driving force for me to strive for excellence. I hope to continue

this

trend in the upcoming exams and make you even prouder. Once again, thank you for always being there for me and for your unwavering support. I look forward to sharing more good news with you in the future. Please convey my regards to Aunt [Aunt's Name] and cousins. I hope to visit you soon and celebrate

this

success together. Take care and stay well. Warm regards, jamishina

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

202 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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B1.Write a letter to your uncle informing him about your improvement of performance in Annual Examination

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today’s teenagers struggles with many social issues. Some people think that this is because their parents are spending more time at work than at home. Do you agree or disagree?

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world?

Some people say that most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of people now are using the internet to meet other and socialize, some think this has brought people closer together while other think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved. What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation? Are there any solutions to combat this problem? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.