Head teacher, Marti Dyers, believes that safe outdoor space is important for keeping students in good health, mentally and physically. They need somewhere they can exercise and be sociable he says. At the moment many schools have dangerous areas where students might trip or have an accident. Write a letter explaining your view.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I read your article about the need for safe outdoor space for
students
at schools, and I totally agree with Mr Dyer's position in Use synonyms
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field. I am a teacher so I can understand his point of view.
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Firstly
, children need better classrooms and laboratories for specialized knowledge in every field. Linking Words
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, they need areas for socializing, Linking Words
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as a study area even a cafe or restaurant. Linking Words
Secondly
, they need better atrium and courts, so as, to have balanced mental and physical health. through sports, Linking Words
students
develop their social skills like cooperation.
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On the other hand
, the yearly minus budget for development is spending on equipment. Schoolyards are mostly in poor condition. With broken benches, playgrounds, and courts. All these dangerous areas might lead Linking Words
students
to injuries.
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have better Knowledge, balanced physical and mental development, and safety. With Proper budgets and supervision, safety can be achieved.
Yours Faithfully,
Maria GarciasUse synonyms
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