Doctors recommend that older people should exercise regulary. However, many of them od not exrcise enough. Waht are the casues ? what can be done to encourage them to execrise?
Most
elders
are advised that they should often exercise regularly by doctors. Nevertheless
, some people seem to ignore that warning. This
essay discusses the unwanted implications of not exercising enough as well as
feasible solutions to resolve such
problems.
There are many elders
who face too much trouble with a lack
of infrastructure
and not
support Correct your spelling
no
of
the Change preposition
from
community
. One source of the issue is the lack
of infrastructure
. To explain, due to
traffic infrastructure
less value satisfy
healthy vehicles Correct subject-verb agreement
satisfies
such
as bike lanes or parking. For instance
, maybe they face a lot of dangers when they are practicing
some sports Change the spelling
practising
such
as cycling or walking. Another origin of the problem is the lack
of help from the community
. To begin
with, adults always struggle with loneliness and lack
of information about the community
which leads to them missing useful information that really
good for their health. Add a missing verb
is really
For Instance
, most elders
are not knowledgeable about sports methods such
as how to cycle logically.
In terms of solutions, several feasible solutions, namely building more sports infrastructure
and establishing adult community
. Firstly
, the government extended the investment budget for park contraction which elders
really need . Secondly
, everyone needs to establish a community
that serves the elderly in their locality which leads to adults will
able to access useful healthy knowledge .
In Verb problem
being
this
conclusion, the cause of elders
not exercising enough is the lack
of infrastructure
and isolation from the community
. I believe that this
issue could be tackled by government investment and get community
attention.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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