9.The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart below displays the number of
cases
of car theft, house burgling
and street robbery in Replace the word
burglary
United
Kingdom and Wales from 1970 to 2005.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, the
car stealing increased significantly over the entire time period. Correct article usage
apply
While
robbery
of houses rose moderately.
At the beginning of the Correct article usage
the robbery
period
there were 0.4 Add a comma
period,
million
cases
of car theft, this
grew steadily to 1 million
over the next 10 years
, before increasing dramatically in
0.6 Change preposition
to
million
in the next 5 years
. From 1995 this
crime Correct determiner usage
these
cases
started to drop sharply, where
in 2005 it went back to 1 Correct word choice
whereas
million
, maintaining its position of
the most committed crime.
In 1970, 0.2 Change preposition
as
million
house burgling happened, it doubled in the first five years
, from 1975 to 1980, this
steeply peaked, where in 1980 there where
around 0.9 Correct your spelling
were
million
of
Change preposition
apply
cases
, in the same year it started to fall moderately to 0.6 million
in 1985. From 1985 to 1990, it slightly rocketed to approximately 0.7 million
, this
was maintained during the next five years
and during the last
10 years
it felt
modestly, ending the period at just over 0.5 Correct your spelling
fell
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cases, million, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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