Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is common these days that the transfer of

money

to anyone can be done

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the help of the

internet

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. As far as I am concerned,

this

development can be positive in some aspects and negative in others, the reasons

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which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, accessing the

internet

is very easy nowadays and

this

can highly affect the amount of effort and time anybody should put in order to transfer

money

.

This

is because

,

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being able to track your account

by

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on

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your smartphone

any

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at any

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time of the day is a

real time

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saver. By way of example, individuals prefer to connect to the

internet

and manage their bank accounts and savings easily

while

having breakfast rather than getting stuck in traffic or

wait

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in a long line of customers just to transfer an amount of

money

each week or even on

daily

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bases

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.

On the other hand

, technology and the use of electronic devices can be hard for some people like the older generation

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are less used to using gadgets and

this

update of the

money

transferring system can contribute to confusion for them.

In addition

to

this

, new methods of scams are produced by thieves that can trigger mostly

the

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costumers

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customers

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of

certain

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age

which

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are less likely to notice details when they use the

internet

. In conclusion,

according to

what has been discussed in the above paragraphs, there are many positive sides

into

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using the

internet

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as your banking assistant,

nonetheless

, there are

also

some negative effects to

this

trend that can lead people to confusion or in some cases they could be a target of scandals and

this

means that they may need more protection in their online activities.