The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates how much money was spent on a family’s monthly expenses (in dollars) on three different categories (food, gas, and clothing) and its average in the USA over a four-month period in 2010.
Overall
, in January refreshments is the highest expenditure
while
attire is the lowest.
Whereas
, they were reversed
at the end
of the period. The money
that is
spent on clothes is the most and cuisine is the lowest cost.
Furthermore
, gas is always in the middle expenses of all the items.
In addition
, the average number shows a fluctuating trend.
To begin
with, foodstuffs stood at $500 at first
then
increased to around $580 in February before falling gradually to approximately $300
at the end
of the period
while
costumes started at $230 at the start and increased sharply to about $470 in February
then
fall to $300 in March before reached a peak at $700 in April. In terms of gas, it shows an upward trend after declining from around $350 basically to $250 in February.
Next,
it improved gradually to $550 in the remaining time.
Additionally
, the average expenditure has a fluctuating trend starting at $300 by origin and
then
reaching a peak in March before declining to $250 in April.
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