some believe that single-sex school students perform better academically. However, others believe that both geneder schools provide children with best social skills for adulthood. Discuss both perspective and give opinion.
Nowadays, some
group
of people have an idea Fix the agreement mistake
groups
like
single-sex Change preposition
that
education
must be prioritised because they think that this
style of education
opens the doors for academic achievements. While another
group of people support Correct word choice
Another
the mix
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mixed
gender
education
because it has crucial
impact on kids' growing skills.
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a crucial
Firstly
, there aren't any sources that support the idea of
single-sex Change preposition
that
education
has important
impact on academic success. Add an article
an important
This
blief
may come Correct your spelling
belief
brief
along with
parents who are more conservative compared to others. Because it is highly doubt
that Wrong verb form
doubted
one
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one-gender
gender
education
helps children to improve their academic skills. Even though there are some examples of it, there are no exact statistics to prove of achievement.
Secondly
multiple
Correct word choice
apply
gender
education
which is the classical one helps kids to understand the needs of other
sex. Correct article usage
the other
This
is important because children may be able to gain empathy skills to differences wlth
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with
this
type of education
system
. There are maybe some people who had great achievements in academia after graduated
from single-sex schools Wrong verb form
graduating
however
, there are much more successfull
student examples who graduated from the Correct your spelling
successful
both
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both-gender
gender
education
system
.
In conclusion, there is no need to make a huge change in education
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the education
system
such
as single-sex education
. Because it may only cause dangeorus
problems more than we have been already dealing with. It is better to Correct your spelling
dangerous
countinue
to have both Correct your spelling
continue
gender
education
system
and look for improving Fix the agreement mistake
systems
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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