The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the way in which a central heating system in a house works.
Overall
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, there are four stages in order to circulate the
water
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for heating purposes, commencing with storing, followed by heating, and
finally
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circulating. In the initial stage, cold
water
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flows into the house through a pipe.
Subsequently
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, it is
then
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heatedthen
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heated then
heat in a boiler (a machine that can be used to raise the
water
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temperature) before pumping into the surrounding house. There are two ways to heat the
water
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using a gas or an oil fuel. After that, hot
water
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flows into radiators that have many small tubes and circulates into all the corners of the building. In the subsequent stage, the hot
water
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that has already been used becomes cold and it is afterwards circulated to the storage
tank
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. Once the storage
tank
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is full, the
water
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passes through the
water
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tank
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by an overflow pipe to collect the overflowing liquid. In the meantime, the
water
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in the storage
tank
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is
also
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used as hot
water
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for taps.
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