The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the way in which a central heating system in a house works.
Overall
, there are four stages in order to circulate the
water
for heating purposes, commencing with storing, followed by heating, and
finally
circulating. In the initial stage, cold
water
flows into the house through a pipe.
Subsequently
, it is
then
heatedthen
Correct your spelling
heated then
heat in a boiler (a machine that can be used to raise the
water
temperature) before pumping into the surrounding house. There are two ways to heat the
water
using a gas or an oil fuel. After that, hot
water
flows into radiators that have many small tubes and circulates into all the corners of the building. In the subsequent stage, the hot
water
that has already been used becomes cold and it is afterwards circulated to the storage
tank
. Once the storage
tank
is full, the
water
passes through the
water
tank
by an overflow pipe to collect the overflowing liquid. In the meantime, the
water
in the storage
tank
is
also
used as hot
water
for taps.
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