The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the way in which a central heating system in a house works.
Overall
, there are four stages in order to circulate the water
for heating purposes, commencing with storing, followed by heating, and finally
circulating.
In the initial stage, cold water
flows into the house through a pipe. Subsequently
, it is then
heatedthen
heat in a boiler (a machine that can be used to raise the Correct your spelling
heated then
water
temperature) before pumping into the surrounding house. There are two ways to heat the water
using a gas or an oil fuel. After that, hot water
flows into radiators that have many small tubes and circulates into all the corners of the building.
In the subsequent stage, the hot water
that has already been used becomes cold and it is afterwards circulated to the storage tank
. Once the storage tank
is full, the water
passes through the water
tank
by an overflow pipe to collect the overflowing liquid. In the meantime, the water
in the storage tank
is also
used as hot water
for taps.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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