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Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others think this is not a good resource use. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the present age , there are many varites of languages in the world to using now. Some
people
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 assert that countries must invest in supporting minority languages.
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 others argue that the
language
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's importance has fewer benefits In
this
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 essay, both sides explored, and followed the opinion. On the one hand, the governments are supporting the native
language
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 which nowadays,
people
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 learn a foreign
language
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 because to complete their studies and to improve their jobs.
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, the role play of a
country
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 that spends more
money
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 to serve it . To give a clear example, India has different languages which are the roots culture and traditions who speak their
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.
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, Indian government are supported the native expression.
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, admittedly, it has fewer advantages. If government spend more
money
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 for
language
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.
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, there are many nagtive in different flieds in the
country
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. To give example,
people
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 have become stravaion and to feel safty,
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 comfortable in their places. They invest their
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such
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 as: healthy sector, transport and economy.
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, they live in their
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 by pace.
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 : Australia spend moer 80% to comfortabl thier individuals which it has balance between them. In conclusion, I would concede that government should spent their
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 to serving the native
language
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 that to entring it to learning in the school. It has little benefits. In my opinion, they must spend thier
money
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 in different flieds because to develop their
country
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 and to feel
people
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 in living space

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