You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter •ask about the school •say what kind of accommodation you want •mention any special requests you have (for example diet). Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Simi and my native language is Hindi and Punjabi as I am from India. I am writing
this
letter in regard to inquire some information about your school
as I am planning to take English courses in your school
.
To start with, I would be more interested in finding out more about the system and ongoing program in your academy. I have heard and read about your teaching method and teacher as you have very qualified and well-experienced staff as well as
unique teaching methods.It would be really appreciated if you send me all the details of your school
and programs.
Despite this
, I am interested in the accommodation which is provided by your school
. I want to tell you that I want to have a single room as I don’t like to share accommodation as I am a very shy and private person as well as
I want to ask about the laundromat options as I have read that you provided a laundry room to first-year students. In addition
to this
, there is also
a special request for my meals as I am a vegan person and I can’t eat any non-vegan items due to
my religious beliefsRephrase
Also,
as well as
I am allergic to mushrooms and I got
rashes all over my body whenever I eat the mushrooms.
I am really forward to hearing from you soon and thank you for your cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Simi.Wrong verb form
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear, single idea. Some paragraphs in your letter blend multiple topics which can affect clarity.
task achievement
Try to fully address all points of the task with equal development. The accommodation and course details should be as elaborated as the special requests.
task achievement
Consider revising sentences for conciseness and clearer expression of ideas. Avoid excessive conjunctions and maintain academic formality in tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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