The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts compare the marital status of the Canadian and the Australian
population
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the majority of
people
in both countries are single.
However
, the proportion of the married
population
in
Australia
is more than in
Canada
,
while
in the latest country, there is
prevalence
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the prevalence
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of the separated public. In
Canada
, the single public is nearly three-quarters with more than half the prevalence of separated
people
,
while
in
Australia
it is under half with a percentage of just over 40% in the latest one. Divorced
people
are the smallest part of the demographic
population
, but in
Australia
, it is twice more than the Canadian one.
People
who have a wife or a husband in
Australia
are more by almost 15% than in
Canada
and they are the largest proportion with almost half of the general public,
whereas
the married
population
in
Canada
is nearly a third of the total number.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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