Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Existance

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Existence

in the world

have

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more comforts than living in

the

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ordinary technology. I absolutely disagree about

these given idea

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. Using

from

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the internet,

it

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will

be opened

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open

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many choices for us.

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with, Someone

prefer

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to

residing

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with a simple

prefence

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preference

. Like these people, they will try to reduce

using

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the use

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from

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of

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the Internet. Why? Because, They consider that, All types of phone,

it

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impacts

on

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apply

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our health.

For living

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To live

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peaceful

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peacefully

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, So, They pick out

to

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this

way.

For instance

, My friend 's eyes had some

pains

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because of utilizing their

IPhone

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iPhone

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a lot.

Thus

, She

decide

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to operate her eyes. Shortly, Durdona who is my friend,

She

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select

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selected

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to simple way

for

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of

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living. In

This

way, There are

most

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the most

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comfortable sides for destroying

lazyness

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laziness

,

stay

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staying

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healthy and living

peaceful

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peacefully

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. Coming back to the

swcond

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second

idea, It may be counted

much

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examples. Even though

,

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Phones have some drawbacks

to

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apply

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us

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, There

are

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are more beneficial sides. For extending our knowledge, for finding data

with

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easily, Technology's item's or phones it is so needful like getting fresh air. Without a tough, People are able to know

many

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apply

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informations

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information

by searching for the

google

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Google

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site

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sites

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fastly

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quickly

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.

Such

as, Me, I

had been finding

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found

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many details from the site quickly, Which were related to my

a

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private field.

To sum up

,

During Being

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while being

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a simple

of

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technology, Life is full of magnificent. As

i

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I

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writing

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wrote

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above I absolutely disagree, Today's needs and work will work out with the Internet. Payments, by seeking for these, we will find and finish our work.