The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the
ammendments
made at the seaside hotel of Templeton for a period of fifteen years, since 1990.
Correct your spelling
amendments
Overall
, many developments to infrastructure have been made Linking Words
while
extending the transport Linking Words
facilities
throughout Templeton, Use synonyms
in contrast
to the roads and Linking Words
bridge
that remain unchanged.
In the top half, right-hand side of the map, an airport adjacent to the existing school and more housing Fix the agreement mistake
bridges
facilities
adjoining the hospital were implemented. Use synonyms
Moreover
, many apartment complexes were simultaneously developed Linking Words
in
the top, left-hand side around the lake.
As per the bottom left corner, a new supermarket was introduced Change preposition
on
along with
massive residential buildings Linking Words
while
demolishing the Linking Words
exisiting
houses, Correct your spelling
existing
subsequently
increasing potential customers. A factory was added to the area and the railway lines were extended throughout the resort. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a ferry was Linking Words
also
added to enhance the transport Linking Words
facilities
for the inhabitants. Use synonyms
However
, massive deforestation Linking Words
was
taken place in order for Verb problem
has
the
modern Correct article usage
apply
facilities
and developments to take place.
In 2005, residents in Templeton had improved their quality of life Use synonyms
siginficantly
with more residential and transport Correct your spelling
significantly
facilities
.Use synonyms
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