Your Next Door neighbor often listens to loud music late at night. Because of the loud music , you often have problems sleeping.
Write a letter to the authority of the building.
In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain the problems it is causing you.
Propose a solution to the problem
that my neighbour often listens to loud music late at night. Which
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home
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at 7 pm and
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my home chores .
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sleep at 11clock . I
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received a lot
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music . I am not able to sleep in
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noise .
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faithfully
Sumandeep
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and should be logically connected to the next.
task achievement
The letter does not fully address all aspects of the task. You need to describe the situation in more detail, explain the problems caused by the loud music, and propose a suitable solution. Additionally, consider using more formal language and a professional tone in your letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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