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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

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The diagrams illustrate some developments for a public
park
 over one hundred years.
It is clear that
 over
such
 a long period the
park
 witnessed dramatic changes like a newly constructed
amphitheater
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 for concerts and a major relocation of different facilities
such
 as water
feature
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 and places to
seat
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. Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that the stage for musicians was demolished and a new
amphitheater
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 for concerts was developed.
Additionally
, all of the seats around the perimeter of the
park
 were relocated to the center, placing them around a
new-built
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 rose garden, which previously was a fountain. As regards the rose gardens, in 1920 there were three of them,
however
 only one has survived the renovation, being left
on
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 its original place in the north-east of the
park
center
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. Another modernization that was made is clearing the pond for water plants in the
north-west
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 with
further
 replacement by a children's playground.
However
, the
park
 still left some water-based facilities for people, building a water feature in the south-west of the central rose garden, which previously was a glasshouse.
Moreover
, nowadays, the
park
 provides visitors with
underground
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 car
park
, that never existed before.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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