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The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
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The pie charts depict the total value of
imports
 in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in
tonnes
.
Overall
, in 1980 and 2000,
spinach
 dominated
imports
 as opposed to 2020.
Additionally
, in all 3 years, at least 150
tonnes
 of produce was brought in from other countries, across all items.
Moreover
, garlic, broccoli and peas exhibited upward trends, as opposed to
spinach
 which declined gradually and ginger, which showed a fluctuation.
Spinach
 was attributed to being the highest at 500
tonnes
 in 1980 and fell by 50
tonnes
 in 2 decades, but continued to be the pinnacle of
imports
 in the year 2000 as well. In 2020
however
, garlic
imports
 surpassed that of
spinach
, to be the maximum at 400
tonnes
.
Furthermore
, garlic was the second most preferred vegetable in 1980 and 2000 at 300 and 360
tonnes
 respectively. Peas was the least in all years and remained more or less the same which was recorded to be 150
tonnes
.
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