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The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
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The pie charts depict the total value of
imports
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 in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, in 1980 and 2000,
spinach
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 dominated
imports
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 as opposed to 2020.
Additionally
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, in all 3 years, at least 150
tonnes
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 of produce was brought in from other countries, across all items.
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, garlic, broccoli and peas exhibited upward trends, as opposed to
spinach
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 which declined gradually and ginger, which showed a fluctuation.
Spinach
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 was attributed to being the highest at 500
tonnes
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 in 1980 and fell by 50
tonnes
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 in 2 decades, but continued to be the pinnacle of
imports
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 in the year 2000 as well. In 2020
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, garlic
imports
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 surpassed that of
spinach
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, to be the maximum at 400
tonnes
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.
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, garlic was the second most preferred vegetable in 1980 and 2000 at 300 and 360
tonnes
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 respectively. Peas was the least in all years and remained more or less the same which was recorded to be 150
tonnes
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.
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