The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
The pie chart compares the import of Qatari for some distinct vegetables between 1980 and 2020.
Overall
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Spinach
was the most popular item during the years, Use synonyms
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Additionally
, the number for most of the vegetables had increased, except ginger and Linking Words
spinach
.
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To begin
, the figure for broccoli increased from 200 (in 1980) to 300 (in 2020), Linking Words
while
the proportion for Linking Words
spinach
had decreased by 2020, from 500 to 350. Use synonyms
Although
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spinach
had a decreasing tendency, it still had the highest number among the other options. In 1980, 250 tonnes of Ginger was imported, but in 2000, Use synonyms
this
number fluctuated to 310 and Linking Words
then
dropped back to 260 in 2020. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the proportion Linking Words
for
peas stayed the same in 1980 and 2000, at 150, rising slightly to 170 by the end of the period.Change preposition
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