The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
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The pie chart compares the import of Qatari for some distinct vegetables between 1980 and 2020.
Overall
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,
Spinach
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was the most popular item during the years,
whereas
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peas
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least.
Additionally
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, the number for most of the vegetables had increased, except ginger and
spinach
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.
To begin
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, the figure for broccoli increased from 200 (in 1980) to 300 (in 2020),
while
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the proportion for
spinach
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had decreased by 2020, from 500 to 350.
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spinach
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had a decreasing tendency, it still had the highest number among the other options. In 1980, 250 tonnes of Ginger was imported, but in 2000,
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number fluctuated to 310 and
then
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dropped back to 260 in 2020.
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, the proportion
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peas stayed the same in 1980 and 2000, at 150, rising slightly to 170 by the end of the period.
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