some people say that fashion affects our lives in a negative way. However, others say that it has more positive effects on our lives. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Someone
consider that there are bad impacts of our life of being modern designs, Correct your spelling
Some
While
Others think that the effective sides comprise more. This
essay will give statements to both idea
. To my mind, These Change to a plural noun
ideas
has
more affectives than positives.
Change the verb form
have
To begin
with, Today's trend
have been becoming well-known in the world. Fix the agreement mistake
trends
People
, Especially, Women like wearing modern clothes. When they go out Change preposition
on they
they
street, they will dress up Correct your spelling
the
Change preposition
in which
which
they Correct pronoun usage
what
are wishing
dress. So, Looking at these, their character will alter. Wrong verb form
wish to
This
condition is pitiful.As a result
of choosing clothes properly, they impact their behaves
, Meanwhile, Like these Replace the word
behaviour
people
called
bad-tempered. Add a missing verb
are called
In addition
, their work does not grow up, because of behaving themselves high. As an example, Some artists have above
situation. Correct article usage
the above
While
wearing fashionable dresses, they will forget that in old times who they are.
Writing about effective sides, People
will be with news, One of this
part is related to the fashion. Right, Creating new collections will help to
be an open-minded person. Correct pronoun usage
me to
As a consequence
of creating and dressing up different types of magnificent dresses, they are over the mood. In other words
, their mood will grow up
and It will multiply to trust themselves. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, In My Add a comma
neighbor,
neighbor
it has been followed the same circumstances. If they wear modern, they feel so good themselves, But they do not Capitalize word
Neighbor
loss
who they are. In extreme self-confidence Replace the word
lose
people
, this
will be followed, but, in all people
are not.
To sum up
, In general, Both sides have plus and minuses, My opinion has more negatives than postives
.Correct your spelling
positives
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