the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.

the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
The bar chart gives information about the survey of
coffe
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coffee
and tea consumption and
habit
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habits
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in five
australian
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ports in the
last
four weeks.
Overall
, it can be seen that
people
in Adelaide prefer to drink and
bought
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instant
coffe
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coffee
,
while
the
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apply
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most of society in
other
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the other
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four cities have
habit
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a habit
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in
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of
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drinking fresh
coffee
. The highest number of
people
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who enjoyed
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enjoyed
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coffee
and tea in a cafe are from Melbourne and Hobart, with around 60% respectively.
Similarly
,
people
in Sydney and Brisban
whom
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enjoyed it accounted for 60% and over 50% each. Meanwhile,
community
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in Adelaide is the
least
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lowest
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(just below 40%) in comparison with those in other countries.
In contrast
, the consumption of fresh brewed
coffee
only
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40% in Sydney and Melbourne. The second highest is Hobart with roughly 40%
,
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and the other ports with approximately 40%.
In addition
, the majority of
people
in Adelaide drink instant
coffee
more likely than
people
in the other two categories.
However
, the highest consumed of instant
coffee
are
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is
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in Hobart and Brisbane with just over half
percent
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per cent
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. Following that, society in Melbourne stood at under half,
while
people
in Sydney accounted for above 40%.
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