the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
The bar chart gives information about the survey of
coffe
and tea consumption and Correct your spelling
coffee
habit
in five Fix the agreement mistake
habits
australian
ports in the Change the capitalization
Australian
last
four weeks. Overall
, it can be seen that people
in Adelaide prefer to drink and bought
instant Wrong verb form
buy
coffe
, Correct your spelling
coffee
while
the
most of society in Correct article usage
apply
other
four cities have Correct article usage
the other
habit
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a habit
the habit
in
drinking fresh Change preposition
of
coffee
.
The highest number of people
Correct pronoun usage
who enjoyed
enjoyed
Wrong verb form
enjoy
coffee
and tea in a cafe are from Melbourne and Hobart, with around 60% respectively. Similarly
, people
in Sydney and Brisban whom
enjoyed it accounted for 60% and over 50% each. Meanwhile, Change the pronoun
who
community
in Adelaide is the Correct article usage
the community
least
(just below 40%) in comparison with those in other countries. Correct word choice
lowest
In contrast
, the consumption of fresh brewed coffee
only
40% in Sydney and Melbourne. The second highest is Hobart with roughly 40%Add a missing verb
is only
,
and the other ports with approximately 40%.
Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, the majority of people
in Adelaide drink instant coffee
more likely than people
in the other two categories. However
, the highest consumed of instant coffee
are
in Hobart and Brisbane with just over half Correct subject-verb agreement
is
percent
. Following that, society in Melbourne stood at under half, Change the spelling
per cent
while
people
in Sydney accounted for above 40%.Submitted by sidneynatasha16 on
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