The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps give information about several changes happening on an
island
because of the construction of some tourist facilities.
It is clear that
the erection of new facilities has completely created a new appearance for the
island
, from an original wilderness to a well-supplied recreational landscape. At
first,
the
island
was pristine, consisting of mostly nothing but a few jungles in the
middle-east
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and
middle-west
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Middle West
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and a beach
in
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on
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the western coast. The total length of the
island
is approximately 250 metres. After tourist facilities are constructed, the
island
experiences considerable changes. Visitors set their first step on
this
island
at a pier emerging on the south,
then
visit a reception right at the
center
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, circled by a vehicle track which
also
leads to a restaurant on the north. The east and west of
this
island
show the mushrooming of accommodations, with footpaths connecting dwellings so that tourists can easily go around.
Specially
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, a new swimming area is developed on the west, taking advantage of the original beach.
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