the charts below show the number of university students in a particular country and how much the government spent on each student between 1984 and 2009 as well as the financial condition of the student's families. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given charts illustrate
the
how many Correct article usage
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students
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addtended
in universities and how much Correct your spelling
attended
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government
spent Correct article usage
the government
for
per Change preposition
apply
student
from 1984 to 2009.
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Overall
, Linking Words
student
participation has gradually risen in universities over the period Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
government
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payment
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continuosly
went down per Correct your spelling
continuously
student
.
In 1984, Use synonyms
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the numder
numder
of university Correct your spelling
number
students
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were
150,000 after 5 years it increased to 250,000 but Correct subject-verb agreement
was
1994
college Change preposition
in 1994
student
attendance showed Use synonyms
slightly
decreased to 200,000. Correct article usage
a slightly
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However
after 1994, campus pupils were grown up till 2009. In 2009, 400,000 Add a comma
However,
number of
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apply
students
participated in universities, compared to 1994, in 2009 number of Use synonyms
students
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were
doubled.
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apply
However
, the Linking Words
government
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payment
per Use synonyms
student
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was
showed Unnecessary verb
apply
decrease
trend. They spent around 14,250/- per Replace the word
a decreasing
student
in 1984 but in 1989, it dropped to 12,500/- per Use synonyms
student
after that it showed a Use synonyms
slightly
growth, which was Change the adverb
slight
aroung
12,750/. After 1994, the Correct your spelling
around
goverment
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government
payment
illustrated Use synonyms
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a dramatical
dramatical
drop till 2004, in 2004, Replace the word
dramatic
it
stopped Correct pronoun usage
they
in
11,250/-. And again the Change preposition
at
payment
represented Use synonyms
slightly
growth.
In 2009, the Change the word
slight
government
paid around 11,600/- per Use synonyms
student
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while
the number of Linking Words
students
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were
400,000.Change the verb form
was
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, government, student, payment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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