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the charts below show the number of university students in a particular country and how much the government spent on each student between 1984 and 2009 as well as the financial condition of the student's families. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the charts below show the number of university students in a particular country and how much the government spent on each student between 1984 and 2009 as well as the financial condition of the student's families. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given charts illustrate
the
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how many
students
addtended
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attended
 in universities and how much
government
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the government
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 spent
for
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per
student
 from 1984 to 2009.
Overall
,
student
 participation has gradually risen in universities over the period
while
 the
government
payment
continuosly
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continuously
 went down per
student
. In 1984,
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the numder
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numder
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number
 of university
students
were
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was
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 150,000 after 5 years it increased to 250,000 but
1994
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in 1994
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 college
student
 attendance showed
slightly
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a slightly
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 decreased to 200,000.
However
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However,
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 after 1994, campus pupils were grown up till 2009. In 2009, 400,000
number of
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students
 participated in universities, compared to 1994, in 2009 number of
students
were
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doubled.
However
, the
government
payment
 per
student
was
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showed
decrease
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a decreasing
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 trend. They spent around 14,250/- per
student
 in 1984 but in 1989, it dropped to 12,500/- per
student
 after that it showed a
slightly
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slight
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 growth, which was
aroung
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around
 12,750/. After 1994, the
goverment
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government
payment
 illustrated
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a dramatical
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dramatical
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dramatic
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 drop till 2004, in 2004,
it
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they
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 stopped
in
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at
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 11,250/-. And again the
payment
 represented
slightly
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slight
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 growth. In 2009, the
government
 paid around 11,600/- per
student
while
 the number of
students
were
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was
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 400,000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, government, student, payment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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