Some people think that government is wasting government is waisting money on arts and that money could be spent elsewhere. Do you agree or disagree.

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is profoundly important as it reflects a

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’s

culture

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and is a

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to represent its

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.

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, it has become a debatable issue whether the

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should spend

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on

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or should that

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be utilised for other purposes like building roads, constructing buildings etc. I vehemently believe that

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should be spent on

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. It is undeniably true that

art

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is the

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to preserve

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and history. To explain it

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, there are many paintings and artistic works that reflect a

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’s heritage and resonate with its history, when

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see

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kind of work, it helps them to understand their ancestor’s life and the

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they lived. If the

government

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not spend

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to preserve

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form of work,

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they might lose the treasure for future generations.

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, in Australia, 78% of Indigenous

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’s history and

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have been passed down to the next generations through paintings.

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, spending

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on

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is an important

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to save and convey the

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and tradition of any

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.

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,

art

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is the means to earn

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or

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, it is employment for some citizens. If the

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does not take the initiative for it, or will not spend any

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,

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, it will discourage the creative

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of the

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, and some might not be able to survive because they earn

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by selling their work either to the

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or to museums. It is irrefutable, that

art

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attracts tourists which

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increases the employment rate in the

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. Since

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popular tourist destinations are characterised because of

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unique

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.

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country

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where the

government

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will not spend

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to preserve

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; it cannot attract

people

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around the globe.

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, the popular city Jaipur of India has recorded an influx of tourism because of its unique stone artwork from medieval times, and the

government

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is spending thousands of dollars every year to keep it safe.

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,

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city has recorded a higher rate of jobs as compared to any other part of India. In conclusion,

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is the

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to represent the

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and its

people

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, so,

money

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should be spent by the

government

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on it