The given 3 pie charts represents the number of percentage of all students, PhD students and junior students who read in per week a journal articles at an Australian university.
The given 3 pie charts
represents
the Change the verb form
represent
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
percentage
of all students
, PhD
students
and junior students
who read in per week a journal
Correct the article-noun agreement
a journal article
journal articles
articles
at an Australian university.
Each chart describes the percentage
of read journal articles
from 1 to 12+. The noticeable feature we can say
in each chart Verb problem
see
that
Add a missing verb
is that
PhD
students
read the vast majority of articles
than other students
. The junior lecturers read three out of four articles
which is much less than PhD
students
. Nevertheless
, 99 percentages
of junior lecturers read more than 1 to 5 Replace the word
per cent
articles
in a week.
The highest percentage
of read articles
from 1 to 5 by all students
is 67%. The lowest one is read by junior lecturers as little as 15%. The percentage
of read articles
of
all Change preposition
by
students
and PhD
students
from 6 to 11 almost
the same.
The general statement that I can make about each chart is thatAdd a missing verb
is almost
,
Remove the comma
apply
PhD
students
read the hefty 80% by reading twenty and more. Although
, PhD
read a modest twelve percentage
from two Replace the word
per cent
sphere
. When we compare, the number of read Change to a plural noun
spheres
articles
will be overwhelming.Submitted by dnm.best on
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