Your childhood friend has established his own business. He needs a partner whom he can completely trust and asks you to become his partner. Write a letter to him. In your letter: • Give the details about your knowledge in this particular field and your opinion; • Tell your decision and its reasons; • Thank him for trust and offer. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

Dear Mr.Kumar, I am writing

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letter in response to your query asking me to join a business start-up as you find me fitting for

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.

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, I would

want

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to thank you for considering me

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.I can not thank you enough for having

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faith in me.

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,

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you are setting up your drug manufacturing unit, and it surely needs a quality check department because

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of a product cannot be compromised. I have recently completed my overseas internship in the same

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arranged

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by my firm and

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been awarded as the best employee for my work.

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, I am thinking

to join

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you as a head of quality assurance because my experience would

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help your firm to gain a positive grip

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the market.

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, producing drugs is a noble profession one could think

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. I am so fortunate to work in

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field. I am looking forward to

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with you . Yours Faithfully, Rihaan Verma