Your childhood friend has established his own business. He needs a partner whom he can completely trust and asks you to become his partner. Write a letter to him. In your letter: • Give the details about your knowledge in this particular field and your opinion; • Tell your decision and its reasons; • Thank him for trust and offer. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

Dear Mr.Kumar, I am writing
this
letter in response to your query asking me to join a business start-up as you find me fitting for
this
.
Firstly
, I would
want
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to thank you for considering me
into
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this
.I can not thank you enough for having
a
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faith in me.
Secondly
,
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you are setting up your drug manufacturing unit, and it surely needs a quality check department because
quality
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of a product cannot be compromised. I have recently completed my overseas internship in the same
arrangend
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arranged
arrangement
by my firm and
has
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been awarded as the best employee for my work.
Therefore
, I am thinking
to join
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you as a head of quality assurance because my experience would
definately
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definitely
help your firm to gain a positive grip
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the market.
Moreover
, producing drugs is a noble profession one could think
for
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. I am so fortunate to work in
this
field. I am looking forward to
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with you . Yours Faithfully, Rihaan Verma
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