Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

The public display of culture through
celebrations
has been a matter of debate for years as most
people
argue for its necessity as it contributes to a huge loss in the nation’s capital. In the meantime, certain groups of
people
often express their dissatisfaction
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the
government
cutting
funds
to
such
events
, debating in support of large public
celebrations
, with the argument that those public
celebrations
are the sole identity of the nation. Both arguments are much compelling as there doesn’t exist a harsh dark and light in the situations, but it lies in the
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area in actuality. Public
celebrations
including festivals, jatras(cultural rallies popular in Nepal), national days, etc are unique to a culture, group or place, and are the markers
for
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their identity. So, cutting
funds
to those
celebrations
for sparing
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some bucks for the
government
might risk these unique heritages to go to extinction as we move throughout the years.
Moreover
, it may risk the extinction of an entire culture which for a country with a diverse heritage like Nepal, based predominantly on cultural tourism might be a much bigger problem in the future. The
government
cutting corners in some public
celebrations
while
not in others, might
also
come off as discriminatory to the
people
of different cultures having their faith attached to those
events
.
On the other hand
, in the time of an economic crisis like the one we are currently in, the
government
spending its
funds
off
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lavish displays and
events
could be debated as an unwise decision.
People
can debate how those
funds
can be utilized in works of social reforms and development rather than a lavish display.
Furthermore
, as the
government
has its own limitations for the sources of revenue, spending it off
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events
that might bring profit to the nation through tourism rather than on solid projects and development works that are guaranteed to bring back the investment would be a better decision if taking things logically. Taking all those things
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consideration, it is fairly a matter dependent upon the situation and the economic state of the nation. If I were the one to decide, considering the current situation of the
government
, I would probably choose to mobilize the
funds
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development projects rather than extravagant public displays.
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  • fostering
  • national pride
  • unity
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of belonging
  • boost the local economy
  • hospitality and retail sectors
  • showcase
  • global audience
  • foreign relations
  • multifaceted
  • allocating
  • quality of life
  • social inclusion
  • cohesive and inclusive society
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