Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?
The public display of culture through
celebrations
has been a matter of debate for years as most people
argue for its necessity as it contributes to a huge loss in the nation’s capital. In the meantime, certain groups of people
often express their dissatisfaction to
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with
government
cutting funds
to such
events
, debating in support of large public celebrations
, with the argument that those public celebrations
are the sole identity of the nation. Both arguments are much compelling as there doesn’t exist a harsh dark and light in the situations, but it lies in the gray
area in actuality.
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celebrations
including festivals, jatras(cultural rallies popular in Nepal), national days, etc are unique to a culture, group or place, and are the markers for
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of
funds
to those celebrations
for sparing
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to spare
government
might risk these unique heritages to go to extinction as we move throughout the years. Moreover
, it may risk the extinction of an entire culture which for a country with a diverse heritage like Nepal, based predominantly on cultural tourism might be a much bigger problem in the future. The government
cutting corners in some public celebrations
while
not in others, might also
come off as discriminatory to the people
of different cultures having their faith attached to those events
.
On the other hand
, in the time of an economic crisis like the one we are currently in, the government
spending its funds
off
lavish displays and Change preposition
on
events
could be debated as an unwise decision. People
can debate how those funds
can be utilized in works of social reforms and development rather than a lavish display. Furthermore
, as the government
has its own limitations for the sources of revenue, spending it off for
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on
events
that might bring profit to the nation through tourism rather than on solid projects and development works that are guaranteed to bring back the investment would be a better decision if taking things logically.
Taking all those things in
consideration, it is fairly a matter dependent upon the situation and the economic state of the nation. If I were the one to decide, considering the current situation of the Change preposition
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government
, I would probably choose to mobilize the funds
to
development projects rather than extravagant public displays.Change preposition
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