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The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology not on our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#smartphones #intelligence #technology #minds
The unprecedented growth of smartphone usage led
people
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the
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modern technology, which could
resulted
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 in adopting time-effective but harmful actions
instead
 of using collective intelligence derived
by
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 our ancestors. I moderately agree with the given statement and in
this
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 I will outline the reasons below. On the one hand, because
of
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smartphones
 are capable of connecting to
internet
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 and AI, nowadays most
of
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the
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people
 are accomplishing their tasks with the aid of
smartphones
for example
 calculations, texting,
even
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 remembering
the
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dates and specific numbers, which could
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with
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 weak memory and decreasing attention span.
On the other hand
, artificial intelligence by
smartphones
are
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 increasingly utilized for communication with not only with individuals but
also
 with the AI itself.
For instance
, most
of
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the
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students
are
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currently use artificial intelligence in order to answer their questions and
making
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 their homework, rather than doing
themselves
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.
On
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 conclusion,
use
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 of
smartphones
 in order to complete tasks
are
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 sharply escalated,
therefore
people
are not tend
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 to do
themselves
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 anymore.
Consequently
, it will disrupt
people
's thinking processes unless it is limited.
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