some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the conspicuous trends in today's world is the colossal upsurge in the problems regarding the

environment

. There is a controversial debate about whether the

extinction

of specific habitats or plants is a vital environmental issue or whether there are other reasons for it. In my viewpoint, I agree with the latter one as there are more major concerns relating to the

environment

. There are plausible reasons behind other

issues

impacting the

environment

. First of all, human activities have affected nature crucially, which has a greater impact on

overall

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environmental system.

Hence

, mankind uses nature for their own benefit in many ways and does not think about the consequences of

this

.

For example

, using too many vehicles increases the carbon dioxide in the

environment

as well as

reducing

the

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fossil fuel.

Thus

, excessive carbon emissions pollute the

environment

and destroy the balance in the

environment

. Meanwhile, cutting down forests

for constructing

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more roads for access vehicles and the noise pollution

this transportations

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more

issues

for the

environment

. All these pollutions lead to global warming, which is the main cause of climate change and creates more concerning

issues

for the

environment

.

On the other hand

, the

extinction

of distinct plants or animals is impacting the

environment

enormously.

Extinction

of any habitats affects the whole biodiversity and makes the ecosystem fragile.

For instance

,

extinction

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of birds can have a huge impact on humans, plants, insects and the

overall

ecocycle

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ecosystem

. I believe, there are many problems that are holding major concerns for the

environment

which may lead to more habitat

extinction

in the future.

To conclude

, people should focus on major

issues

that are alarming for the

environment

,

otherwise

, it might be too late to realise that there is nothing much left to save.