You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter   explain why you are having the partydescribe your plans for the partysuggest how your friend can travel to the party and where he / she can stay

Dear Sneha, Hope
this
letter
find
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you well. I am writing
this
letter to invite you
for
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my graduation
party
.
Finally
, I finished my
bachelor
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degree and I received
gold
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a gold
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medal for my excellent scores in all subjects. To celebrate
this
success, I am throwing
party
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a party
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on
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this
weekend at my farmhouse. I invite all my school and college friends to celebrate my achievement because it is impossible to achieve without none of your all
supports
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. I am planning to host
party
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a party
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on
Retro
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the Retro
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Bollywood Dance and
Music
theme, as we were obsessed with 90's Bollywood
music
. So, you have to be in a retro Bollywood look and dress.
Moreover
, I
hire
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a famous live
music
orchestra to play 90's movies
music
so it would be an amazing dance
party
. The most excitement about the
party
is that all our friends are coming and it will be our perfect
get together
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after a long time. I know your concern about coming to the
party
that we live in
a
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same city but in
a
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opposite directions. I am going to arrange a private bus to pick up all my friends because all are living in a different part of the city and my farmhouse is located in a remote area.
Also
, I will arrange accommodations
to
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all of you, as my farmhouse has lots of rooms available for stay. Now, you don't have any excuses to skip the
party
, and I am very excited to see you
in
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at
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party
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the party
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. Trust me, we have
a
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fun in the
party
and I am very excited to meet all of you. See you very soon. Take care. Regards, Urvashi
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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