You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you are having the partydescribe your plans for the partysuggest how your friend can travel to the party and where he / she can stay

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Dear Sneha, Hope

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letter

find

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you well. I am writing

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letter to invite you

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my graduation

party

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, I finished my

bachelor

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degree and I received

gold

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a gold

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medal for my excellent scores in all subjects. To celebrate

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success, I am throwing

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party

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a party

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weekend at my farmhouse. I invite all my school and college friends to celebrate my achievement because it is impossible to achieve without none of your all

supports

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. I am planning to host

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party

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a party

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Retro

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Bollywood Dance and

Music

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theme, as we were obsessed with 90's Bollywood

music

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. So, you have to be in a retro Bollywood look and dress.

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, I

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a famous live

music

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orchestra to play 90's movies

music

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so it would be an amazing dance

party

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. The most excitement about the

party

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is that all our friends are coming and it will be our perfect

get together

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after a long time. I know your concern about coming to the

party

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that we live in

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same city but in

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opposite directions. I am going to arrange a private bus to pick up all my friends because all are living in a different part of the city and my farmhouse is located in a remote area.

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, I will arrange accommodations

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all of you, as my farmhouse has lots of rooms available for stay. Now, you don't have any excuses to skip the

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, and I am very excited to see you

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party

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the party

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. Trust me, we have

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fun in the

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and I am very excited to meet all of you. See you very soon. Take care. Regards, Urvashi

Submitted by bhavsar.urvashi on Tue Oct 10 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

276 words

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