The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.  

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of police
reports
filed in Johnstown, throughout the year 2016.
Additionally
, the line graph depicts the mean
temperature
(in Celcius) experienced each month in Johnstown respectively.
Overall
, from
January
to July the
temperature
increased, following which it decreased. As evidently seen from the line graph, the
temperature
increased gradually from
January
, until it reached an all-time high of approximately 25 degrees Celcius in July.
Following
this
, the average
temperature
gradually decreased by roughly 17 degrees Celcius, between July and November. The theft
reports
gradually increased from
January
to June after which the
number
of cases skyrocketed till September. In the following months, there was a steep decrease in the figures, by approximately 90
reports
. An opposite trend can be seen in traffic violations. From
January
to September, the
number
of
reports
gradually decreased, from roughly 190 in
January
to March to a little below 150 in July to September, following which there was a slight increase. Interestingly, the
number
of
reports
filed
due to
noise complaints remained constant throughout the year, at roughly 25
reports
. In conclusion, the
number
of
reports
filed
due to
theft experienced major fluctuations throughout the year, followed by traffic violations. The least
number
of
reports
filed during
this
time period was
due to
noise complaints.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, reports, temperature, january with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • data representation
  • crime rate
  • monthly variations
  • correlation
  • theft
  • vandalism
  • assault
  • seasonal trends
  • temperature fluctuations
  • peak
  • decline
  • law enforcement
  • civil disorder
  • statistical analysis
  • public safety
  • climatic influence
  • incidence rate
  • aggregate data
  • preventative measures
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