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You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. ● Thank your friend ● Describe your watch ● Tell them what you want them to do

#friend’s #house #weekend #friend
Dear Rockey, I hope my letter will find you in good health. Your party was so exciting
last
 Sunday. Especially, I was really thrilled about the tasty meals and music.
Besides
, I made a few friends and we did not realize how the time passed quickly. I can not explain my sincerest gratitude and admiration for everything. During the party time, a lot of absorbing experiences happened and I will never forget spending time with you. Unfortunately, when I arrived home, I found that I had lost my smartwatch. It was black with several features on it and it was
also
 a birthday gift from my parents.
For
this
 reason, it was valuable for me. That's why, I request you to look for it at your home. My thanks go to you and I look forward to a forthcoming response from you. Best regards, Murod
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