Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job，but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Work

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is an inevitable part of a person’s life journey; everyone will eventually need to

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and land

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a

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to provide for themselves. Young

people

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are faced with a dilemma: whether to choose a

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that

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is align

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with their interests or

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land

on

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a safe

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that will realistically provide for their

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. As someone who

have

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just entered the workplace myself, even though being realistic is important, I believe that everyone should be able to decide freely in regards

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their

future

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career

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. Older

generations

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would view

career

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and

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as the core of one’s life. Generally speaking,

people

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will need to

work

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for more than forty years of their life before being able to enjoy retirement. Landing on a

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that is

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deemed safe and realistically sustainable would be essential. Most of us would eventually need to provide not only for ourselves

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but

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for our family members. It is relatively difficult to start anew and find a better or stabler

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at an older age if there happens to be an issue with their working condition.

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, young

people

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should be more cautious and pick a

career

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path that will be able to provide growth and stability.

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, with the advancement of our society, nowadays there are increasingly more opportunities everywhere in

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to jobs and

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changes. With the endless innovations led by our younger

generations

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, new opportunities continue to grow and can help hopefully cater

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passionate interest of each individual. Government programs have

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started to provide more safeguarding programs to aid

people

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who may face difficulties in their workplace and needs, which in turn can help reduce the fear

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people

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to trade

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their boring but stable

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career

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for a

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that piques their interest.

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, there is a

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in which

people

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will normally excel better in what they like and have a knack for. Doing what you like is very important

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for young

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of the newer

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. Most

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will feel bored and emotionally tired if forced to do mundane

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. It is unfathomable to be working another forty or more years doing something you have despised even before you take a step into the workplace. There will be no motivation for the person to grow professionally or to excel in any way. To tackle

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issue, young

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should be able to have a say

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the

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they will want to do.

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something we envision ourselves being happy in,

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will

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provide a psychological positive self-fulfilling prophecy. Older

generations

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should trust the unique views of the younger

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because

it is clear that

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the society they

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in has drastically changed over the past years. It is still to be noted,

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that young

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people

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should take up responsibility and

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hard for the

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they have

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. In conclusion,

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it is essential to be realistically choosing for our

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, I believe that young

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nowadays can weigh and make a choice

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their calling. The environment we live in has changed and younger

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will have a different set of

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in regards to what the

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awaiting them will be. Everyone will be responsible for their choices and

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should

work

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diligently not to wither the hopes and prospects

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themselves,

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parents should be giving the luxury

for

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the

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young

people

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to pursue the

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they have painted in their minds.