compare and contrast shopping habits of different generations. Discuss their preferences, motivated, attituteds
Currently, people recognize the
distinguish
of shopping Replace the word
distinction
habits
between different generations. Each generations
Change to a singular noun
generation
have
their own preferences, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
habits
, and attituteds
on buying Correct your spelling
attitudes
products
. This
essay will compare those clearly
Initially
, the biggest issue is preference when they purchasing
something. Wrong verb form
purchase
Millenials
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Millennials
prefer
listen to reviews from their relatives Add the particle
prefer to
such
as close friends, neighborhoods
, or even their children. Change the spelling
neighbourhoods
Conversely
, Correct article usage
the lastest
lastest
group of ages might get information and reviews online from users. It seems like those two ages want to ensure about the Correct your spelling
latest
products
before buy
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buying
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
,
but in opposite ways.
A Remove the comma
apply
further
point to discuss is habits
of buying stuff. Parents Correct article usage
the habits
seems
like they have an ethical purchasing. Change the verb form
seem
For instance
, they would love to get some products
that worthwhile
, especially technology devices. Add a missing verb
are worthwhile
By contrast
, student
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students
ages
Correct your spelling
are
concern
about being an old-fashioned person. Wrong verb form
concerned
Therefore
, they often buy trending products
.
Another contrastion
is what Correct your spelling
contraction
contrast
make
them Change the verb form
makes
to
think about when they want to buy something. Change the verb form
apply
For older
people, Change preposition
Older
they
are more careful Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
getting goods like caring about insurance. Change preposition
about
On the other hand
, applying vouchers or discount
could appeal Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
teenagers
.
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to teenagers
To conclude
, Generations hugely effect
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affect
to
the way Change preposition
apply
consumers'
Change noun form
consumers
decision
Replace the word
decide
of purchasing
. Those difference have their own positive and negative attributes. Change preposition
to purchase
However
, the resembly
of Correct your spelling
assembly
those generation preference
and Change the determiner
that generation preference
those generation preferences
habits
contribute to the guarantee for better shopping.Submitted by lengogiahan04112004 on
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